Bok Rupright
Wednesday, August 10, 2011
Does this make SENSE?!?
It bothers me that a statement "listing" a number of items is followed by a question. I would separate them, i.e. replace the semi-colon with a period and have the question stand alone. That would also improve the rhythm of the paragraph.
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